Native brit, please help

Hello,
Please any native british speaking can help me with these few line?
I'm not sure if sound/ feel correct for native brit.
Thanks!!!

it is a cover let. for my resume; i've deleted the sensible informations.

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A charismatic, highly adaptable personality with over 4 years experience gained from primarily _________ sector. As a motivated entrepreneur and results orientated _____ I have a proven track record of providing exemplary projects to a broad range of leading international organizations such as....

I developed the first independent ____. The project was selected by___x____ for the case study of the use of __a__ technology as well as customer experience, this being the first ___a____ project selected by __x___. Later on, in 2006 the project drew the attention of publisher investors and finally I sold to a leading _____x____.

?In last years my attention was drawn by the __z____development, so I decided to move to London to increase my knowledge in the sector. In the last 6 month I've been working for a London based company -_____to coordinate the development for several ____projects.

??I have a strong belief that my marketing formation and entrepreneurial experience combined with my technical skills can help create amazing projects in the future.