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Vincent Teo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

National day

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There are many races in Singapore such as Chinese, Malays, Indians and so on. Although we are different races, we celebrate National Day together annually. It is on the 9th of August every year.

On National Day, it has / there has many performances. The pupils and adults can rest on that dsay because it is a holiday. We can watch the match past and parade which are performed by the school bands. The spectators cheer happily by the roadside.

The children also perform on that day. They dance gracefully while the choir sing / sings on the stage. Everyone has an enjoyable time during National Day.
  

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There are many races in Singapore, such as Chinese, Malays, Indians and so on. Although we are of different races, we celebrate National Day together annually. It is held/celebrated on the 9th of August every year.

  • There are many races in Singapore, such as Chinese, Malays, Indians and so on.
  • Although we are of different races, we celebrate National Day together annually.
  • It is held/celebrated on the 9th of August every year.
  • On National Day, there are many performances.
  • The citizens of Singapore can rest because it is a public holiday.
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There are many races in Singapore, such as Chinese, Malays, Indians and so on. Although we are of different races, we celebrate National Day together annually. It is held/celebrated on the 9th of August every year.

On National Day, there are many performances. The citizens of Singapore can rest because it is a public holiday. We can watch the marchpast which are accompanied by the
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Your essay are excellent but there was an error 'dsay'.

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