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when I was just 6 I had a narrow escape when our one strorey house collapsed all of a sudden at night at 3.

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Problems are underlined: when I was just 6 I had a narrow escape when our one strore y house collapsed all of a sudden at night at 3 .

— Mister Micawber

  • Problems are underlined: when I was just 6 I had a narrow escape when our one strore y house collapsed all of a sudden at night at 3 .
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Problems are underlined:

when I was just 6 I had a narrow escape when our one strorey house collapsed all of a sudden at night at 3.
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when I was just 6 I had a narrow escape when our one strorey house collapsed all of a sudden at night at 3.

I was six yrs when I had a narrow escape without even a scratch. Our one storey house had collapsed all of a sudden at 3 am night.
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I was six yrs when I had a narrow escape without even a scratch. Our one storey house had collapsed all of a sudden at 3 am night.
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I was six yrs when I had a narrow escape without even a scratch. Our one storey house had collapsed all of a sudden at 3 am night.

I was six years old when I had a narrow escape without even a scratch. Our 1 storey house collapsed all of a sudden at night 3am.

Can some words be substituted for some good words?

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I was six years old when I had a narrow escape without even a scratch. Our one-storey house collapsed all of a sudden at three (o'clock) in the morning / at 3 a.m.

Can some words be substituted for some good words?-- Mostly, I want you to be more careful. Why should we bother to help when you post things like 'yrs' and 'strorey'? Proofread before you post.
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