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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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narrative storyline

Is narrative the correct word?

The narrative/storyline of season 1 of the show revolves around his him and his daughters kidnapping.

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Both "narrative" and "storyline" work OK there. However, something has gone wrong around "his him". Assuming he wasn't kidnapped too, I think you mean just "him".

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  • Both "narrative" and "storyline" work OK there.
  • However, something has gone wrong around "his him".
  • Assuming he wasn't kidnapped too, I think you mean just "him".
  • Also, "daughters" should be "daughter's" (assuming one daughter; if more than one then it should be daughters' ).
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Both "narrative" and "storyline" work OK there. However, something has gone wrong around "his him". Assuming he wasn't kidnapped too, I think you mean just "him". Also, "daughters" should be "daughter's" (assuming one daughter; if more than one then it should be daughters').
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