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Odessa Dawn Posted 11 years ago
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(Name) is a participant in one of our classes.
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(Name) is a participant in one of our classes. He comes to class two times a week for a forty-five minutes lesson; rarely does he miss a session. He is a very hardworking student, and always pursues excellence. (Name) is always at the top of our classes. His status of reading at school is excellent. Furthermore, he improved his classroom performance and therefore the benefits seem to add up fast. His sheer infectious enthusiasm is motivating for us. Consequently, he is on good terms with his fellow students, staff and non-staff teaching.
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(Name) is a participant in one of our classes. He comes to class two times a week for a forty-five minutes lesson; rarely does he miss a session. He is a very hardworking student, and always pursues excellence. (Name) is always at the top of our classes. His status of reading at school is excellent. Furthermore, he improved his classroom performance and therefore the benefits seem to add up fast. His sheer infectious enthusiasm is motivating for us. Consequently, he is on good terms with his fellow students, staff and non-staff teaching.
How can I improve that text, please?
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(Name) is a participant in one of our classes. He comes to class two times a week for a forty-five minute lesson; rarely does he miss a session. He is a very hardworking student, and always pursues excellence.
- (Name) is a participant in one of our classes.
- He comes to class two times a week for a forty-five minute lesson; rarely does he miss a session.
- He is a very hardworking student, and always pursues excellence.
- (Name) is always at the top of our classes.
- His status of reading ability at school is excellent.
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(Name) is a participant in one of our classes. He comes to class two times a week for a forty-five minute lesson; rarely does he miss a session. He is a very hardworking student, and always pursues excellence. (Name) is always at the top of our classes. His status of reading ability at school is excellent. Furthermore, he improved his classroom performance and therefore th
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Odessa Dawn(Name) is aparticipantstudent in one of our classes. He comes to class two times a week for a forty-five minute lesson; rarely does he miss a session. He is a very hardworking student and always pursues excellence. (Name) is always at the top of our classes. Hisstatus ofreading skillat schoolis e
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