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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
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name change

For a description of a hotel name change, could you please check the following sentences are polite and natural?

<Announcement of hotel name change and renovation>
We are delighted to announce that the hotel name will change from
Hotel A to Hotel B effective March 1, 2014.
Currently, we are renovating guest rooms, entrance, and reception .
After renovation, our hotel will be more comfortable with bright guest rooms and relaxing reception.
Thank you for being one of our valued customers. We appreciate your cooperation in this matter.
  

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<Hotel Renovation and Name Change> We are delighted to announce that our hotel name will change from Hotel A to Hotel B effective March 1, 2014. We are now renovating guest rooms, entrance, and reception, and our hotel will soon be more comfortable, with bright guest rooms and relaxing reception area. Thank you for being one of our valued guests.

— Mister Micawber

  • <Hotel Renovation and Name Change> We are delighted to announce that our hotel name will change from Hotel A to Hotel B effective March 1, 2014.
  • We are now renovating guest rooms, entrance, and reception, and our hotel will soon be more comfortable, with bright guest rooms and relaxing reception area.
  • Thank you for being one of our valued guests.
  • We appreciate your patience and understanding.
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<Hotel Renovation and Name Change>

We are delighted to announce that our hotel name will change from Hotel A to Hotel B effective March 1, 2014. We are now renovating guest rooms, entrance, and reception, and our hotel will soon be more comfortable, with bright guest rooms and relaxing reception area.


Thank you for being one of our valued guests. We ap
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