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Mystery of Psychology

0 00Appreciate if you could correct English mistakes below; 00Emotion can actually effect on human body? One story I heard about is; in the Middle Ages, one death penalty criminal was under a experiment of the psychological effect on human body to figure out what the consequence if person believe his list cut and die slowly? 00Actually, his list was not actually cut, cold knife was just touched the skin, and water dripped instead of actual blood (he can not see it). I could not believe when I heard the consequence, he dead…00I have no idea whether this story is true or not, but from tonight, I start to make believe my tummy, hey, you are slim. 0-
  

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02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02i 02br 02br 01span 01u 00Appreciate if 02u 00you could01u 00 correct English02u 00 mistakes01u 00 below; 02u 02span 01span 01u 00Emotion02u 00 01u 00can02u 00 actually01u 00 effect on02u 00 human body? One story I heard 01del 00about02del 00 01u 00is; in02u 00 the Middle Ages, one 01u 00death penalty criminal02u 00 was 01u 00under a experiment02u 00 of the psychological effect on human body01u 00 to figure out what the consequence if person believe02u 00 his01u 00 list02u 00 cut and 01u 00die02u 00 slowly01u 00? 02u 02span 01span 00Actually, his01u 00 list02u 00 was not actually 01u 00cut, cold02u 00 knife 01u 00was02u 00 just touched the skin, and 01u 00water dripped02u 00 instead of actual blood 01u 00(he can not see it)02u 00.

— Mister Micawber

  • 02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02i 02br 02br 01span 01u 00Appreciate if 02u 00you could01u 00 correct English02u 00 mistakes01u 00 below; 02u 02span 01span 01u 00Emotion02u 00 01u 00can02u 00 actually01u 00 effect on02u 00 human body?
  • One story I heard 01del 00about02del 00 01u 00is; in02u 00 the Middle Ages, one 01u 00death penalty criminal02u 00 was 01u 00under a experiment02u 00 of the psychological effect on human body01u 00 to figure out what the consequence if person believe02u 00 his01u 00 list02u 00 cut and 01u 00die02u 00 slowly01u 00?
  • 02u 02span 01span 00Actually, his01u 00 list02u 00 was not actually 01u 00cut, cold02u 00 knife 01u 00was02u 00 just touched the skin, and 01u 00water dripped02u 00 instead of actual blood 01u 00(he can not see it)02u 00.
  • I could not 01u 00believe when02u 00 I heard the 01u 00consequence, he dead02u 00…02span 01span 00I have no idea whether this story is true or not, but from 01u 00tonight, I start02u 00 to make believe my 01u 00tummy, hey, you02u 00 are slim.
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