My writing task 1: The water usage

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The pie chart compares and contrasts the data in the differences in the amount of water use in San Diego, California and the world wide, which is measured in percentage. A closer look at the diagram highlights the fact that while residental is regarded as the main reason in San Diego, the world wide reveales agriculture for the major cause. Among the sectors, 60% is the proportion of residental in San Diego Country, which is approximately 20% more than that of in California. By contrast, the piece of residental in the world wide is over 8 times as large as the fragment in San Diego. In comparison with the sector of agriculture in world wide, the piece of agriculture in California is smaller by a margin of over 40%. On the other hand, the percentage of agriculture in San Diego consists of a half less than that of in world wide. In California, 39% and 28% is the proportion of residental and agriculture, respectively. On the other hand, industry has the average segment of the other two.

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Write your essay in paragraphs. Do you know what a paragraph is?

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Paragraph 1: Describe the subject matter, the number and types of figures, the units of measure, geography, time range, and any categories. Write one to three sentences to cover all these aspects. Do not describe anything about the data values.

Paragraph 2: Describe 2 or 3 most significant observations about the data in the figures or tables.

Paragraph 3: Describe more details that you see in the data. You do not need a conclusion or summary paragraph.

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The pie chart (There is more than one pie chart!) compares and contrasts the data in the differences in the amount of water use in San Diego, California (San Diego, California is a city in the state of California. Just like Atlanta, Georgia is a big city in the state of Georgia. You misled the reader here because San Diego, California is not in any of the pie charts..) and the world wide, which is measured in percentage. ~~A closer look at~~ the diagram highlights the fact that while residental is ~~regarded~~ as the main reason (wrong word) in San Diego, the world wide reveales agriculture for the major cause. Among the sectors, 60% is the proportion of residental in San Diego Country, which is approximately 20% more than that of in (wrong word) California. By contrast, the piece of residental in the world wide is over 8 times as large as the fragment in San Diego. In comparison with the sector of agriculture in world wide, the piece of agriculture (wrong expression) in California is smaller by a margin of over 40%. On the other hand, the percentage of agriculture (wrong expression) in San Diego consists of a half less than that of in world wide. In California, 39% and 28% is the proportion of residental and agriculture, respectively. On the other hand, industry has the average segment of the other two.

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