My W.I.P's please feel free to comment

I am not sure if i can class the first as a poem but i shall post it anyway, all of these are poems written by my self since the age of 15, i by no means class my self as a poet and i know my spelling and gramar is sketchy at best but i just wish to share my work with others, please enjoy or not, you decide.

Wise words

Where do i begin, at the start the middle or the end?

We all have social issues, whether about drug miss use, physical or mental abuse. Some lie about it, hide it all away. Whilst it lingers inside them, eating away.

Talking helps, but you feel like a burden, speaking to friends and family about your problems, but they already herd them.

Yeah it helps a bit, i feel the burden is lifting, i cant find the words to describe it so ill just keep on writing.

About my issues, my problems and the solutions i can not find.

So i choose not to talk, i keep it all inside, believing by writing it down, its out of site out of mind.

The light at the end of this tunnel of dispare, 5-8, funny, green eyes and brown hair.

She started as a work colleague and became a friend, she is now my mentor and a pillar of strength.

She means so much to me, her guidance and advice, will have a long-lasting, profound effect throughout the rest of my life.

For this, one day, i will repay the debt, so until then a place in in my heart there will always be, so i shall never forget.

My polish girl

I gave you my hand, you gave me guidance.

I gave you my mind, you gave me confidence.

I gave you my feelings, you gave me freedom.

I gave you my soul, you gave me meaning.

I gave you my heart, you gave me love.

I give you my love, you give me hope.

I am yours

Eternity

My heart aches for the love that is yours, for i wish that it could be mine.

Because love drives men to crazy things for one taste of the divine.

If you were to offer me your love and wish to be my wife.

My heart, body mind and soul would be yours for all eternal life.

One kiss of those sweet cherry lips would be worth life its self.

And the love we would share would out weigh all living wealth.

All love can survive throughout life and death.

Even in a loved ones whispered last breath.

For my body is just a ship for my soul.

But my love for your, god bless, shall never dissolve.

Broken

Out of order until further notice, some parts damaged beyond repair

(my trust)

Twisted, deranged, mangled far past a recognisable state (my body)

Bruised, strained and torn, barely functioning at all

(my heart)

Deceived, tricked and taken for a fool, unaware blinded by a love

(my mind)

Tainted, used, second-hand goods, what was required has been taken

(my love)

Mocked, naked for all to see, tossed aside, valueless.

(my pride)

Broken



Burning love

A match is struck, the lit candle flickers gently and grows brighter,

A love is born

Burning steadily for hours, seemingly years, its wax roots branche out securing its foundations,

A love grows stronger

Slowly, but surely the proud flame shrinks, until, with one last flicker of hope,

A love dies