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My soul_my eyes Posted 21 years ago

My walking stick

0 He says 02br
00"This circle cant go on forever" 02br
00I smile 02br
00knowing the truth is here- 02br
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00I am leaving behind all the ghosts 02br
00Painting over the shadows 02br
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00Pink are my walls 02br
00where you lay 02br
00securely 02br
00proudly 02br
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00I know this maze I sometimes create 02br
00Can seem 02br
00neverending 02br
00confusing 02br
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00I tried replacing everything 02br
00Hiding 02br
00I tried to reclaim everything 02br
00Crying 02br
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00But cant you see 02br
00All the knots have led me to this: 02br
00A rainbow is all I see 02br
00even as the sun weeps 02br
00Misty blooms 02br
00entrance me 02br
00As i breathe it all in 02br
00As i breathe you in 02br
00As i stand their still 02br
00Remembering 02br
00the sins 02br
00that led me 02br
00to this 02br
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00I heard your cries 02br
00these cirlces must die 02br
00but i see our future burning in your eyes 02br
00So i strech a smile 02br
00knowing this chain must break 02br
00just not today. 02br
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00I Love You 0-
  

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0These elementary features need fixing: 02br 02br 00cant 02br 00here- 02br 00cant 02br 00i 02br 00i 02br 00i 02br 00their 02br 00cirlces 02br 00i 02br 00i strech 02br 00I Love You 02br 02br 02br 00You must put an effort into at least proofreading your work before you expect someone else to read it. Punctuation would also be nice-- do not force your readers to try to figure out how your phrases are related-- it makes them ornery and difficult to please. 02br 02br 0-

— Mister Micawber

  • 0These elementary features need fixing: 02br 02br 00cant 02br 00here- 02br 00cant 02br 00i 02br 00i 02br 00i 02br 00their 02br 00cirlces 02br 00i 02br 00i strech 02br 00I Love You 02br 02br 02br 00You must put an effort into at least proofreading your work before you expect someone else to read it.
  • Punctuation would also be nice-- do not force your readers to try to figure out how your phrases are related-- it makes them ornery and difficult to please.
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0These elementary features need fixing: 02br
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00cant 02br
00here- 02br
00cant 02br
00i 02br
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00i strech 02br
00I Love You 02br
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00You must put an effort into at
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0 01blockquote
00This circle can't go on forever12blockquote
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00This line I like, MSME. 02br
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00MrP 0-
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0 Just not today 02br
00not even tomorrow 02br
00I can't walk without you 02br
00I am lost without holding you. 02br
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