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Vizlo Posted 22 years ago
Letter Writing

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Dear Mr. Cowan

Thank you for sending me the information bulletin about the conference that will be held in Leicester on June 22, 2004. I would like to confirm my attendance.

Please send me any further informations about this conference as schedule, accommodation, etc.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,
  

Top answer

Hey, this is nearly perfect. I didn’t bother to re-write it, just added a few little corrections. Information is singular (not informations).

— Aileen

  • Hey, this is nearly perfect.
  • I didn’t bother to re-write it, just added a few little corrections.
  • Information is singular (not informations).
  • An S schedule may be correct but it doesn’t make sense to me so I deleted it.
  • Best wishes.
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Hey, this is nearly perfect. I didn’t bother to re-write it, just added a few little corrections. Information is singular (not informations). An S schedule may be correct but it doesn’t make sense to me so I deleted it. Best wishes.


Dear Mr. Cowan

Thank you for sending me the information bulletin about the conference that will be held in Leicester on June 22, 2004. I woul
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