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Hello,Could you please correct this part too."We already have a house."“Of course we don’t need these poky little rooms anymore"."I will call on you in two days with the result. Goodbye.""Honey that’s unbelievable!""In two days we will be rich,  just wait a little."Next day being in an elevated mood he went to work.Michael decided to share the good news with his friend Tom .“Good for you, Michael. An agent came to me too, but we won mobile telephones only.""They are prizes too, incentive prizes, and you won them! Congratulations.I have never heard of that agency , have you Tom?""No, I haven’t heard anything about them either. There are loads of firms, organizations that held that lotteries. The main thing is to win a prize. As for where they are located, who they are that’s not important.""Could you ask him if I can take part in their lottery again. I don’t mind risking.”

Free_spirit · Accepted Answer

"We already have a house." [ok]

“Of course we don’t need these poky little rooms anymore". [ok]

"I will call on you in two days with the result. Goodbye." [ok]

But... "I will call on you" makes it sound like a physical visit. If you are talking about a phone conversation it would be best to say "I will call you..."

"Honey, that’s unbelievable!" [ok - I suggest adding the comma after "Honey"]

"In two days we will be rich, just wait a little." [ok]

The next day, being in an elevated mood, he went to work.

Depending on the context, it might be more natural to say "...being in a better mood..." or "...being in a happier mood..." ... "elevated" is ok, but I wouldn't use it in general conversation.

Michael decided to share the good news with his friend Tom . [ok]

“Good for you, Michael. An agent came to me too, but we won mobile telephones only."

...but we only won mobile telephones.

...but we only won mobile phones. [better]

"They are prizes too, incentive prizes, and you won them! Congratulations. [ok]

I have never heard of that agency , have you Tom?" [ok]

"No, I haven’t heard anything about them either. There are loads of firms and organizations that held that lotteries. The main thing is to win a prize. As for where they are located or who they are, that’s not important." [this is a difficult one... I am guessing at what is 'best' here. Note, the "or" could also be an "and", depending what you are trying to say]

"Could you ask him if I can take part in their lottery again. I don’t mind risking it.”

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