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Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
My teacher - Miss Lim
Please help me to correct them, thanks!!
Miss Lim is a 23-year-old teacher who is gentle and pretty. She teaches Standard 2,5 and 6 (pupils) in St Mary School. She is an English teacher. She works in morning school. She likes to wear a cosy blouse in pink with a plain dress.
Every morning, she drives to school in her old, but comfortable car before 7.30 am. During her free periods, she stays in the staffroom marking the pupils' workbooks and exercises. When she is tired, she would / will have some drinks for refreshment. She also like to chat / talk with her colleagues about how to improve her pupils improvement / results. She is indeed a responsible and hard-working teacher.
Sometimes, she stays back to give extra class for / to year 6 pupils. She wants to help them in their weakness subject. When she comes home, she loves to water her plants in her pretty garden. In the evening, she likes to potter around the garden. That's / It is the daily life of my teacher, Miss Lim.
Miss Lim is a 23-year-old teacher who is gentle and pretty. She teaches Standard 2,5 and 6 (pupils) in St Mary School. She is an English teacher. She works in morning school. She likes to wear a cosy blouse in pink with a plain dress.
Every morning, she drives to school in her old, but comfortable car before 7.30 am. During her free periods, she stays in the staffroom marking the pupils' workbooks and exercises. When she is tired, she would / will have some drinks for refreshment. She also like to chat / talk with her colleagues about how to improve her pupils improvement / results. She is indeed a responsible and hard-working teacher.
Sometimes, she stays back to give extra class for / to year 6 pupils. She wants to help them in their weakness subject. When she comes home, she loves to water her plants in her pretty garden. In the evening, she likes to potter around the garden. That's / It is the daily life of my teacher, Miss Lim.
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Hi Vincent, Read carefully to find my edits, please. Ask about any you don't understand. Miss Lim is a 23-year-old teacher who is gentle and pretty.
- Hi Vincent, Read carefully to find my edits, please.
- Ask about any you don't understand.
- Miss Lim is a 23-year-old teacher who is gentle and pretty.
- She teaches Standard s2,5 and 6 in St Mary School.
- She is an English teacher.
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Hi Vincent,
Read carefully to find my edits, please. Ask about any you don't understand.
Miss Lim is a 23-year-old teacher who is gentle and pretty. She teaches Standard s2,5 and 6 in St Mary School. She is an English teacher. She works in morning school. She likes to wear a cosy blouse in pink with a plain skirt. Cozy is not a good word here. It describes how it feels,
Read carefully to find my edits, please. Ask about any you don't understand.
Miss Lim is a 23-year-old teacher who is gentle and pretty. She teaches Standard s2,5 and 6 in St Mary School. She is an English teacher. She works in morning school. She likes to wear a cosy blouse in pink with a plain skirt. Cozy is not a good word here. It describes how it feels,
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