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Puakeng Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

My Sweet Memories in my early life

Last Saturday, I attended my old friend's wedding buffet. It brought me some meaningful images. I felt so blessed to be having a great memory of childhood with them. At that time, I thought that my life would be staying the same and could always hang out with them. I was wrong. I got massive hits in life, my painful sickness. It drove to who I am today. It guided me to where I want to go. Every night, the illness whispered to me with a hint of how to get a better tomorrow by simply trying new ways. During the treatment, I made some enormous changes. I learnt to arouse my inner resilient powers in order to be happier and stronger. I learnt of how to give back the best as I could for the greatest joy. I also knew that it was inevitable getting overwhelming criticism from many, especially who have kindred relationships with me.

After the war, undeniably, a new life has begun. I know that it's impossible to turn back to the past. However, I still want to say, tens of thousands of thanks to all my KAMPUNG friends. The time we played together and fooled together has meaningfully added some colours in the contents of my life. I am so proud once to be part in this circle of friends. My old buddies wish you; every single of your tomorrow will be enriched and cherished than today.

Can you help me check through any grammartical errors in my article? Thank you so much of your crutial helping.

Always Yours Sincerely
Pua
  

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Last Saturday, I attended my old friend's wedding buffet. It brought me some meaningful images. I felt so blessed to be having a great memory of childhood with them.

  • Last Saturday, I attended my old friend's wedding buffet.
  • It brought me some meaningful images.
  • I felt so blessed to be having a great memory of childhood with them.
  • At that time, I wished my life would stay the same and I could always have the opportunity to hung out with them.
  • However, I was wrong ( mistaken ).
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Last Saturday, I attended my old friend's wedding buffet. It brought me some meaningful images. I felt so blessed to be having a great memory of childhood with them. At that time, I wished my life would stay the same and I could always have the opportunity to hung out with them. However, I was wrong (mistaken). I got massive hits in life; my painfu
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Hi Likaa. Thanks for your help. I love your comments too, 'I enjoyed and even got excited'. The words encourage me to go further.

Urs Sincrerely,

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