My story for the book ending
Here's my story for the book ending. Please, check if there are any mistakes. Will appreciate your help a lot.
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The necessity to speak was like a pending provocative statement. It broke her into pieces. She was never ready to speak to him though.
"Nigel", she said, "I can't leave it as it is..."
He took a stroke and started drawing some chaotic curves on the sand. "I know", he said, "We should be very careful not to tell Leticia about what we've done. She's gonna tell everyone."
She sighed. "It was the last time", she thought.
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Have sent it to BookEditors and paper writing company GrammarChecker as well.
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denvincent The necessity to speak was like a pending provocative statement. It broke her into pieces. I cannot figure out what you mean here, even figuratively speaking.
- denvincent The necessity to speak was like a pending provocative statement.
- It broke her into pieces.
- I cannot figure out what you mean here, even figuratively speaking.
- denvincent He took a stroke Stroke?
- denvincent drawing some chaotic curves on the sand.
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denvincentThe necessity to speak was like a pending provocative statement. It broke her into pieces.
I cannot figure out what you mean here, even figuratively speaking.
denvincentHe took a stroke
Stroke?
denvincentdrawing some chaotic curves on the sa
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