My story, criticize please

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00So I had to write a short story beginning with words "I was planning to give my friend a surprise."02br
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01b00Christmas story02b02br
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00 I was planning to give my friend a surprise. Because Steve and I studied at different universities, we hadn’t seen each other for almost half a year and were longing to meet each other. So I had decided to test whether the time had affected his hot-blooded temper.02br
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00 Since I knew his favorite department store in the town, I had decided to get on his nerves there. It was a Christmas break and no other character could make a cosier aura than Santa Claus. Of course, I was the one who played the Santa’s part.02br
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00 As Steve and his girlfriend Sue entered the store, I stood out of the crowd and called “Ho, ho, ho! I see a beautiful couple waiting to be beatified! Let me cheer you!” As soon as they smilingly approached me, I suddenly snatched Sue’s handbag and ran away screaming “You’re happy now! This will be donated to charity!”02br
00 Steve exploded like a snappish dog as he started chasing me. Since he was a decent runner and I had to carry the ridiculous Santa’s costume, he caught me in a wink. As a result of our collision, we both hit the ground. Before Steve punched me in a face, he recognized my smile.02br
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00Any feedback appreciated.0-