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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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My story.
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It seems, that a biggest surprise is this history. I walk at the my apartment and i can see a tiger. He has two colors, orange and black. Then I walk slowly to my bedroom, ops my floor is old. He turn his head and he look at me, I am scared and i think what he doing now? I realize, that i have a second on decision. I decided, I run to my door from the kitchen and I close the door. I turn around and i look at window. I think, i can jump, but my conscience, speak to me - don't do this. In one moment, I repair my damage connected with my whole family if I kill fear and if I kill tiger. May, you don't understand what i feel, but belive me it's very hard for me. My wife left me and she takes my son. Okay, truth is, I was alcoholic and I understand my wife, now. I look at my son's picture and I can see more tears on the floor. I have wish, I want to be in the other world, which is in a universe far away from our planet. And then i can see a sand a lot. I think it's dream, but the sand is hot. It's horrible, i worried me it. What I do now? Can i ask, how? I must consider death on the sand, where a sun is my nightmare. I have last wish, I want my wife and my son on this sand. But it does not work. I must rest. I'm tired too much.
It seems, that a biggest surprise is this history. I walk at the my apartment and i can see a tiger. He has two colors, orange and black. Then I walk slowly to my bedroom, ops my floor is old. He turn his head and he look at me, I am scared and i think what he doing now? I realize, that i have a second on decision. I decided, I run to my door from the kitchen and I close the door. I turn around and i look at window. I think, i can jump, but my conscience, speak to me - don't do this. In one moment, I repair my damage connected with my whole family if I kill fear and if I kill tiger. May, you don't understand what i feel, but belive me it's very hard for me. My wife left me and she takes my son. Okay, truth is, I was alcoholic and I understand my wife, now. I look at my son's picture and I can see more tears on the floor. I have wish, I want to be in the other world, which is in a universe far away from our planet. And then i can see a sand a lot. I think it's dream, but the sand is hot. It's horrible, i worried me it. What I do now? Can i ask, how? I must consider death on the sand, where a sun is my nightmare. I have last wish, I want my wife and my son on this sand. But it does not work. I must rest. I'm tired too much.
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Hi I understood it with no problem. This is just my version - I might write: - It seems that the biggest surprise is this history. I walk into my apartment and I can see a tiger.
- Hi I understood it with no problem.
- This is just my version - I might write: - It seems that the biggest surprise is this history.
- I walk into my apartment and I can see a tiger.
- He has two colors, orange and black.
- Then I walk slowly to my bedroom.
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I understood it with no problem. This is just my version - I might write:
- It seems that the biggest surprise is this history. I walk into my apartment and I can see a tiger. He has two colors, orange and black. Then I walk slowly to my bedroom. He turns his head and he looks at me, I am scared and I think what is he doing now? I realize, that I have a second to make a decis
I understood it with no problem. This is just my version - I might write:
- It seems that the biggest surprise is this history. I walk into my apartment and I can see a tiger. He has two colors, orange and black. Then I walk slowly to my bedroom. He turns his head and he looks at me, I am scared and I think what is he doing now? I realize, that I have a second to make a decis
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