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My story...
This is a very important story I’m making so I need someone to check the spelling and grammar and if things are said in a wrong way. Plz!
Kid1: Look, I found this pearl.
Kid1: I'm gonna sell it.
Kid2: Ok. But you sell your pearl
tomorrow. I'm tired so let's go to
the inn for the night.
Kid1:Ok. And then we head back
to our town!
Kid2: Yeah!
(at the next day the Kid1 is stolen by a big human-bird (a harpy) lol! So the Kid2 needs to rescue him.when Kid1 was stolen the harpy left a feather on the floor and a weird guy comes to tell kid2 this):
WIERD GUY: Look! That's the feather
that belongs to Lyth, the Harpy, she is the
loyal servant of Pork. Lyth is headed to Sea
Town.
WIERD GUY: Quick! You cand find her
there before she takes a boat to head to
Pork's castle!
Kid2: How do you know that?
WIERD GUY: Ummm... Well... Common
knowledge!
WIERD GUY: Good Luck!
(So that’s when the whole story begins ! )
Tx!
Kid1: Look, I found this pearl.
Kid1: I'm gonna sell it.
Kid2: Ok. But you sell your pearl
tomorrow. I'm tired so let's go to
the inn for the night.
Kid1:Ok. And then we head back
to our town!
Kid2: Yeah!
(at the next day the Kid1 is stolen by a big human-bird (a harpy) lol! So the Kid2 needs to rescue him.when Kid1 was stolen the harpy left a feather on the floor and a weird guy comes to tell kid2 this):
WIERD GUY: Look! That's the feather
that belongs to Lyth, the Harpy, she is the
loyal servant of Pork. Lyth is headed to Sea
Town.
WIERD GUY: Quick! You cand find her
there before she takes a boat to head to
Pork's castle!
Kid2: How do you know that?
WIERD GUY: Ummm... Well... Common
knowledge!
WIERD GUY: Good Luck!
(So that’s when the whole story begins ! )
Tx!
Top answer
Kid1: Look, I found this pearl. I'm gonna sell it. Kid2: OK.
- Kid1: Look, I found this pearl.
- I'm gonna sell it.
- Kid2: OK.
- But sell your pearl tomorrow.
- I'm tired, so let's go to the inn for the night.
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Kid1: Look, I found this pearl. I'm gonna sell it.
Kid2: OK. But sell your pearl tomorrow. I'm tired, so let's go to the inn for the night.
Kid1: OK. And then we head back home!
Kid2: Yeah!
(The next day Kid1 is stolen by a big human-bird (a harpy), so Kid2 needs to rescue him. When Kid1 was stolen the harpy left a feather on the floor and a weird guy comes to tell kid2
Kid2: OK. But sell your pearl tomorrow. I'm tired, so let's go to the inn for the night.
Kid1: OK. And then we head back home!
Kid2: Yeah!
(The next day Kid1 is stolen by a big human-bird (a harpy), so Kid2 needs to rescue him. When Kid1 was stolen the harpy left a feather on the floor and a weird guy comes to tell kid2
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