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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
my sonnet
0 Hi!! I'm not good in English and I have to frame a sonnet. 02 br
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00 What do you think about this? Is it right? 02 br
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00 Tanhks for your help!! 02 br
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00 REMEMBER 02 br
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00 Remember me when I am gone away, 02 br
00 Gone far away into the snowy land; 02 br
00 When you can’t say good-bye me by the hand, 02 br
00 And you, in your room, with an unhappy smile, stay. 02 br
00 Remember me when no more, day by day, 02 br
00 You tell me of our holidays that you plann'd: 02 br
00 Only remember me; you understand 02 br
00 It will be late to phone me because I’ll be on a slight. 02 br
00 Yet if you should forget me for a while 02 br
00 And afterwards remember, do not worry: 02 br
00 in a while the time will hurry 02 br
00 if you caress my pullover with a smile. 02 br
00 So the days will run in a short order too 02 br
00 And Saturday will arrive with the moon 02 br
00 As the last day of school in June 02 br
00 My dear I want always live with you! 02 br
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00 Mony 0-
02 br
00 What do you think about this? Is it right? 02 br
02 br
00 Tanhks for your help!! 02 br
02 br
00 REMEMBER 02 br
02 br
00 Remember me when I am gone away, 02 br
00 Gone far away into the snowy land; 02 br
00 When you can’t say good-bye me by the hand, 02 br
00 And you, in your room, with an unhappy smile, stay. 02 br
00 Remember me when no more, day by day, 02 br
00 You tell me of our holidays that you plann'd: 02 br
00 Only remember me; you understand 02 br
00 It will be late to phone me because I’ll be on a slight. 02 br
00 Yet if you should forget me for a while 02 br
00 And afterwards remember, do not worry: 02 br
00 in a while the time will hurry 02 br
00 if you caress my pullover with a smile. 02 br
00 So the days will run in a short order too 02 br
00 And Saturday will arrive with the moon 02 br
00 As the last day of school in June 02 br
00 My dear I want always live with you! 02 br
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00 Mony 0-
Top answer
02 br 02 br 00 Some lines don't make sense or contain grammatical errors. g. When you can’t say good-bye me by the hand, ) 0-
- 02 br 02 br 00 Some lines don't make sense or contain grammatical errors.
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- When you can’t say good-bye me by the hand, ) 0-
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0 Some lines have more than 10 syllables, and many aren't exactly iambic. 02 br
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00 Some lines don't make sense or contain grammatical errors. (e.g. When you can’t say good-bye me by the hand, ) 0-
02 br
00 Some lines don't make sense or contain grammatical errors. (e.g. When you can’t say good-bye me by the hand, ) 0-
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