My song - your opinion. :)

0 I SHALL GO02br
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00I have lagged behind too long...02br
00It is tough to move along02br
00In the world where I would live02br
00And that was ruined due to me.02br
00I see stones lie on the ground -02br
00That's my way with all its mould,02br
00But it's got as I believe02br
00Beauty that doesn't make me free.02br
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00And I shall go,02br
00Even if I'm alone,02br
00I will try02br
00To be not so shy...02br
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00Give me sight to see the beauty02br
00Of the world nearby,02br
00I'm so tired of routine duties02br
00Which I am bound by...02br
00I want to fly!02br
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00Only cry, misunderstood,02br
00Fields are turned into large woods,02br
00I feel pools where should be rivers,02br
00There are no roads where I go.02br
00Stars do not know what time means...02br
00What's my life worth near this?02br
00But I'm still one of believers02br
00Which departed years ago.02br
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00And I shall go,02br
00Even if I'm alone,02br
00Even if lose my mind -02br
00But give me sight!02br
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00Give me sight to see the beauty02br
00Of the world nearby,02br
00I'm so tired of routine duties02br
00Which I am bound by...02br
00I want to fly!02br
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00The moon on the sky is pointing my way,02br
00The sun is warming me with its rays,02br
00My friends are stars, my ally is the wind -02br
00I'll go against each who didn't act how I did!02br
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00Give me sight to see the beauty02br
00Of the world nearby,02br
00I'm so tired of routine duties02br
00Which I am bound by...02br
00I want to fly! 0-