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Sun 94 Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

my smartphone camera

Please correct me if you find any mistakes. Thanks a lot.
My smartphone has several good features. First, its camera has great functions. It comes with 4millinon pixels, which mean the pictures are clearer. Also, I can videotape anything that interests me with the camera of my cellphone. Whether I take a picture of running horse or videotape running trains, the screen or the pictures is clear and focused.
  

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Why do you use both smartphone and cellphone? Be consistent. VIdeotape is a term from about 8 technology generations ago.

  • Why do you use both smartphone and cellphone?
  • Be consistent.
  • VIdeotape is a term from about 8 technology generations ago.
  • I haven't seen recording on tape in years.
  • My smartphone has several good features.
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Why do you use both smartphone and cellphone? Be consistent.
VIdeotape is a term from about 8 technology generations ago. I haven't seen recording on tape in years.

My smartphone has several good features. First, its camera has great functions. It comes with 4millinon pixels, which mean
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If videotape is not correct, what word can I use?
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take a video
record a video

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