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Lucus Ong Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

My Situation On Studies

Could anybody correct the article below for me and suggest some better expressions or words or idioms based on the writing below?

If you are too busy, you can just give me a few suggestions or correct a few most problematic sentences for me.
In my opinion, satisfying things means somethings make oneself satisfy. But there is other word satisfactory means the same. So I don't know how to choose a right word here.
I may obey my plan of studies for a long time this time. So I don't know it's correct to use simple present tense.
Great thanks in advance
Topic: My Situation on Studies
Because of some reasons like wrong method of studies, temperamental problems and so forth, my foundation of studies is extremely poor. In addition to, there are only 140 days before the unified exam and it is a very standard exam. So the only way to obtain a satisfying result on it is to train myself devilishly hard.
If I fail in this unified, I will lose a lot of choices and another important things, and my parents maybe disappointed.
Actually, I have been asking myself to study hard from junior middle two. However, I always only obey my plan of studies a few days after it is finalized. I hope that there will be a difference this time.
  

Top answer

If you are too busy, you can just give me a few suggestions or correct a few of the most problematic sentences for me. In my opinion, satisfying things means somethings make oneself satisfy. But there is other word satisfactory means the same.

  • If you are too busy, you can just give me a few suggestions or correct a few of the most problematic sentences for me.
  • In my opinion, satisfying things means somethings make oneself satisfy.
  • But there is other word satisfactory means the same.
  • (I don't understand what you are saying here - you can satisfy a debt by paying it off, you can make yourself satisfied by doing a good job, or your homework can get a grade of "satisfactory", which is not a good score) So I don't know how to choose a right word here.
  • My work satisfies me.
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If you are too busy, you can just give me a few suggestions or correct a few of the most problematic sentences for me.

In my opinion, satisfying things means somethings make oneself satisfy. But there is other word satisfactory means the same. (I don't understand what you are saying here - you can satisfy a debt by paying it

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