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My sister told me yesterday

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My sister told me yesterday that my wife was cheating on me. I didn't believe untill she showed me pictures of the guy, who he is cheating with on her phone. I was angry and started crying like a child. I confronted her about the allegations and she denied and told me that the guy was a friend.

  

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I'm not a native speaker, but there are some suggestions: My sister told me yesterday that my wife had been cheating on me . I didn't believe until she showed me pictures of the guy who my wife cheated with on her phone. I was angry and started crying like a child.

  • I'm not a native speaker, but there are some suggestions: My sister told me yesterday that my wife had been cheating on me .
  • I didn't believe until she showed me pictures of the guy who my wife cheated with on her phone.
  • I was angry and started crying like a child.
  • I confronted her about the accusation of her extramarital affai r ( an allegation is usually made without giving proof, but you had her pictures with another man) ,but she denied and told me that the guy was a friend.
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I'm not a native speaker, but there are some suggestions:

My sister told me yesterday that my wife had been cheating on me. I didn't believe until she showed me pictures of the guy who my wife cheated with on her phone. I was angry and started crying like a child. I confronted her about the accusation of her extramarital affair ( an allegation is

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My sister told me yesterday that my wife had been cheating on me. I didn't believe until she showed me pictures of the guy who my wife cheated with on her phone. I was angry and started crying like a child. I confronted her about the accusation of her extramarital affair ( an allegation is usually made without giving proof, but you had her pictures wit

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