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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
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My sister Patty

Please check out the following paragraph.

1. I have two sisters.

2. Our personalities are very different.

3. One of them, Ptty, likes to go outoutside, but I would like to stay home.

4. She likes to shout out loud, whereas I don't do that.

5. She likes to play basketball, but I like to listen to music.

6. She likes to play computer while I like to read noves.
  

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I have underlined some problems: 1. I have two sisters. 2.

  • I have underlined some problems: 1.
  • I have two sisters.
  • 2.
  • Our personalities are very different.
  • 3.
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I have underlined some problems:

1. I have two sisters.

2. Our personalities are very different.

3. One of them, Ptty, likes to go outoutside, but I would like to stay home.

4. She likes to shout out loud, whereas I don't do that.

5. She likes to play basketball, but I like to listen to music.

6. She li
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1. I have two sisters.

2. Our personalities are very different.

3. One of them, Patty, likes to go outsides, but I likes to stay home.

4. She likes to shout out, whereas I don't do that.

5. She likes to play basketball, but I like to listen to music.

6. She likes to play computer games while I like to read novels.
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Two new problems in #3:

3. One of them, Patty, likes to go outsides, but I likes to stay home.

4. She likes to shout, whereas I don't do that.
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3. One of them, Patty, likes to go outdoors, but I like to stay home.

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