My short writing for philosophically inclined

I sometimes write stuff like this. Perhaps it may be easier for philosophically inclined people to read through. I would appreciate any responses pointing out any room for improvements.

the true freedom can only be understood when you have realized freedom from artificial aspect of their identities in coexistence with nature.

It is my sincere wish that one will seek greater understanding of oneself - derivations of their socially constructed ideas and ideals - being able to identify the expressions that explain the 5w's of our feelings, thoughts, and actions - to be considered at the present for the moments that could be mutually shared with the good. Consequently, learn to conceptualize the naked truth of our motivating forces simply as an outcome of his/her equations of life when looking after our wants, needs, and desires. With such discernment, we may come closer to reaching in-depth explanation of the changes and its elements, in its due course, seeking greater values of our existence rather than to ponder into the world of nothingless, only then, we may be able to consider the possibilities of measuring up against constructed and leading forces of our nature which may, without counter-balancing agents, have incalculable and deterimental affect on uniformity and sustainability of the values and perception of life.

there's not one religion, government, or education system that seek to serve all mankind that were born in different environments other than the values that we have adopted which is often dependant on one's belief system. It is the self-discovered humanistic values and qualities that will help us to feel unimpaired by unexplained artifacts that we all are suffocated by.