My short writing

Please help me with my English.
Q:I would like to know what mistakes I make in this short writing. Thank you

I love dreaming.
Dreaming is the only connection between his world and mine.
Dreaming of him reminds me that I lost some one I love.
I had a dream the day before.
In my dream,
He came,
I looked at him; talked to him; felt him, his is warm,
He looked pale; I begged him not to go away but he insisted.
After waking up,
I vividly remember his visage, but I lost his voice,
I am glad he came to my dream again.

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