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Sundarnaz Posted 10 years ago
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My short note
Respected madam, I had visited the clinic. Unfortunately, the doctor said my device was not ready then (the word he used was "yet"). They have given me a next date on Monday. Sorry madam I have disappointed you again. But I am helpless.
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To a Canadian like me, your note is excessively polite, but I assume this is the style used in Pakistan,
Here are a few edits.
Respected madam,
I have visited the clinic. Unfortunately, the doctor said my device was not ready yet. They have given me another appointment on Monday. Sorry, madam, I have disappointed you again. But I am helpl
Here are a few edits.
Respected madam,
I have visited the clinic. Unfortunately, the doctor said my device was not ready yet. They have given me another appointment on Monday. Sorry, madam, I have disappointed you again. But I am helpl
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