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Mieganti Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
My short essay [need a basic check]
1 b 00 I have a "talent" to make and leave few mistakes in my essays... 02 br
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00 Heavy traffic is one of the biggest problems in our days. There were endless arguments made about solutions so far, but none of them brought results. While few people suggest banning traffic from towns and city centers, others are against this idea. 02 br
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00 In my opinion, transport banning from the city centers is a good idea, because there won‘t be any congestions anymore. What is more, people and tourists would have safe pedestrian-only zones, so it would help to attract more tourists to visit our city monuments. Of course, distances are quite long, so deliveries and public transport should be allowed. 02 br
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00 On 00 the 00 other 00 hand, this solution is quite inconvenient and it would take a lot of time to make it popular with people. Instead of it there are some alternative solutions such as charging cars for driving into the city centers. Incoming money could be used to create more car parks. Also cars could be allowed only on alternate days. 02 br
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00 To summarise, banning private transport from our cities‘ centres could cause even more inconveniece that the advantage. That‘s why I personally think that traffic should be reduced only in particular days and during the cities fiests a small charge should be taken. In my opinion it could help to reduce heavy traffic problem. 0-
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00 Heavy traffic is one of the biggest problems in our days. There were endless arguments made about solutions so far, but none of them brought results. While few people suggest banning traffic from towns and city centers, others are against this idea. 02 br
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00 In my opinion, transport banning from the city centers is a good idea, because there won‘t be any congestions anymore. What is more, people and tourists would have safe pedestrian-only zones, so it would help to attract more tourists to visit our city monuments. Of course, distances are quite long, so deliveries and public transport should be allowed. 02 br
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00 On 00 the 00 other 00 hand, this solution is quite inconvenient and it would take a lot of time to make it popular with people. Instead of it there are some alternative solutions such as charging cars for driving into the city centers. Incoming money could be used to create more car parks. Also cars could be allowed only on alternate days. 02 br
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00 To summarise, banning private transport from our cities‘ centres could cause even more inconveniece that the advantage. That‘s why I personally think that traffic should be reduced only in particular days and during the cities fiests a small charge should be taken. In my opinion it could help to reduce heavy traffic problem. 0-
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0 Heavy traffic is one of the biggest problems in our days. There were endless arguments made about solutions so far, but none of them 01 i 00 has 02 i 00 brought results. 02 br 02 br 00 In my opinion, 01 i 00 banning private transport such as cars and motorcycles 02 i 00 from the city centers is 01 i 00 in theory, [this was added because you make it sound as if banning traffic was the only good idea where in the second paragraph, you list the other side] 02 i 00 a good idea [no comma here] because there 01 i 00 would not 02 i 00 be any congestions anymore.
- 0 Heavy traffic is one of the biggest problems in our days.
- There were endless arguments made about solutions so far, but none of them 01 i 00 has 02 i 00 brought results.
- 02 br 02 br 00 In my opinion, 01 i 00 banning private transport such as cars and motorcycles 02 i 00 from the city centers is 01 i 00 in theory, [this was added because you make it sound as if banning traffic was the only good idea where in the second paragraph, you list the other side] 02 i 00 a good idea [no comma here] because there 01 i 00 would not 02 i 00 be any congestions anymore.
- What is more, people and tourists would have safe pedestrian-only zones, so it would help to attract more tourists to visit our city monuments.
- ] 02 i 00 This sentence contradicts the rest of your paragraph.
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0 Heavy traffic is one of the biggest problems in our days. There were endless arguments made about solutions so far, but none of them 01 i 00 has 02 i 00 brought results. While few people suggest banning traffic from towns and city centers, others are against this idea. 02 br
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00 In my opinion, 01 i 00 banning private transport such as cars and motor
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00 In my opinion, 01 i 00 banning private transport such as cars and motor
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0 To summarise, banning private transport from our cities‘ centres could cause 02 br
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00 in my opinion it must be city centres not cities centres... 02 br
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00 in my opinion it must be city centres not cities centres... 02 br
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0 Thank you so much for your comments ^_^ 02 br
00 "Cities" centres was such a stupid mistake because the correct form was written in my English book... Thank you 00 poci_wasiats 00 for spotting it :] 02 br
00 And thank you Anonymous for your help :} 0-
00 "Cities" centres was such a stupid mistake because the correct form was written in my English book... Thank you 00 poci_wasiats 00 for spotting it :] 02 br
00 And thank you Anonymous for your help :} 0-
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