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Maj Posted 21 years ago

My shadow

You scared my heart off
In the middle of the night
when I dreamt my future bright
You embraced me with lust
In the middle of the night
when all I could see was the dusk
It never felt so good to have you in the dark.
  

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That's a good one Maj. Maybe it requires one more line as the ending seems abrupt.

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  • That's a good one Maj.
  • Maybe it requires one more line as the ending seems abrupt.
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That's a good one Maj. Maybe it requires one more line as the ending seems abrupt.
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Yeah, I know. Can you help me? I just couldn't come up with anything else.
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Maybe you could add... after the last line...

In the middle of the night
when all I have is a lonely soul
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Thanks.

I am going to love you more than anyone
In the middle of the night
look inside of me.
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Lurking in the darks, Patience and love their only arms, His hands were two bandits, Waiting with restless hearts, For a moon coloured treasure, To be paid as ransom.
(May I be pardoned, I didn't mean to be voyeur.)
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very nice one...i like it so muchh
go on
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You scared my heart off
In the middle of the night
when I dreamt my future bright
You embraced me with ****
In the middle of the night
when all I could see was the dusk in your mind
It never felt so good to have you in the dark
In the middle of the night
when all I have is a lonely soul
I am going to love you more than anyone
In the middle
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Hllo maj,

Then it should be 'your hands were two bandits',and I think if you put the 'lurking...' after the third line, then it makes sense. One more thing, you have to pay the ransom, moon coulered treasure is yours. Cheers
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