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Kk Posted 20 years ago
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My sentences need your help. Thank you

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00In any realm, if leaders are easily persuaded by public opinion to change their ideas, if leaders can’t adhere to their own principals, they are destined to not make a brilliant success. 02br 02br 00Too many parenthetic clauses - always simplify sentence structure where possible. "02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 0-

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  • 00In any realm, if leaders are easily persuaded by public opinion to change their ideas, if leaders can’t adhere to their own principals, they are destined to not make a brilliant success.
  • 02br 02br 00Too many parenthetic clauses - always simplify sentence structure where possible.
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