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00 1. 00 Graduating from junior high school, I didn’t take more factors—personal interest, parent’s suggestion, and teachers’ advice—into account, and make a hasty decision to major in electronics at five- year technical school at which I learnt nothing on the grounds that electronics didn’t interest me. 02 br
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00 2. I continued to make self-examination and explore what I want to learn in high education after making a serious mistake to enter the technical school. 02 br
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00 3. After the Cultural Revolution, the Chinese government has been beginning to make a self-criticism in order for China to take concrete policies to improve all aspect of people’s life. 02 br
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00 4.Human beings got through hardships caused by World War Two, which guide people to know the significance of world peace after making a series of self-criticisms. 02 br
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00 1. 00 Graduating from junior high school, I didn’t take more factors—personal interest, parent’s suggestion, and teachers’ advice—into account, and make a hasty decision to major in electronics at five- year technical school at which I learnt nothing on the grounds that electronics didn’t interest me. 02 br
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00 3. After the Cultural Revolution, the Chinese government has been beginning to make a self-criticism in order for China to take concrete policies to improve all aspect of people’s life. 02 br
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00 4.Human beings got through hardships caused by World War Two, which guide people to know the significance of world peace after making a series of self-criticisms. 02 br
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0 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 Kk 12 cite 11 pre 10 Hello, 12 br 12 pre 12 br 10 I am not sure whether the two sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics. 12 br 12 br 10 1. ) Graduating from junior high school, I didn’t take more factors—personal interest, parent’s suggestion(s), and teachers’ advice—into account, and made a hasty decision to major in electronics at (a) technical school where I learnt that electronics didn’t interest me.
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- ) Graduating from junior high school, I didn’t take more factors—personal interest, parent’s suggestion(s), and teachers’ advice—into account, and made a hasty decision to major in electronics at (a) technical school where I learnt that electronics didn’t interest me.
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01 font 00 4. People endured/survived hardships, caused by World War Two, which led them,after making a series of self-criticisms, to understand the significance of world peace. 02 font 02 br
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01 font 00 4. People endured/survived hardships, caused by World War Two, which led them,after making a series of self-criticisms, to understand the significance of world peace. 02 font 02 br
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00 The challenge in the original sentence is to clarify which noun each clause or phrase qualifies. 02 br
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