My sentences for your review

Hi,

Dear friend ,

Thanks for the photos that you sent to me. It is nice to hear that he reached home safely. I am so glad to have met, and had an opportunity to hear a speech by, my favorite author. Thanks to him for all the memorable moments! I look forward to seeing you on our next visit.

Yours affectionately,


Clive

Thanks Clive for corrections.

yesterday I have wrote few lines in another thread, here I have posted it again. Correct me

Hi,

Requirements for souvenir: For this year's souvenir, I need the following. 1. President's message to all the members 2. Accounts/ balance sheet signed by President 3. Photographs of standing committee and all other subcommittee members. 4. The (names of themmebers of the ?) Charitable Fund C

Dear sponsor,



We need your Advertisement for our upcoming souvenir. But we don’t have your previously published Ad with us. I have searched in our archived folders too. Did not find yours. So please send us your Ad content, and let us know how you want see your Advertisement. We will create/prepare new one for you. Please send AD matter ASAP.

(please review my sentence

chitra08Dear sponsor,



We need your an advertisement for our upcoming your souvenir for the upcoming season. But we don’t have your any previously published Ad in our fileswith us. I Wehave even searched in our archived folders. too. D

Alphecca Stars, Thank you very much for your corrections.

"We need your an advertisement for our upcoming your souvenir "

But I have a doubt, souvenir is "ours" - we are going to publish it right? But you have changed as "yours". Is it correct? please clarify me.

Dear sir,

Few days back Jane called me and said that she called you and Mrs. Cary and left a voice message. After that, I did not hear anything from her, I guess now she reached USA. I dont have her contact information, If she calls , I will enquire about your mail and let you know.



(please correct me )

Hi,

Dear sir,

Few days back Jane called me and said that she called you and Mrs. Cary and left a voice message. After that, I did not hear anything from her, I guess now she reached USA. I dont have her contact information, If she calls , I will enquire about your mail and let you know.
Dear sir, <<< It sounds like you know this person, so use his nam

Hi,
One of my friend publishing his first book (collection of poems) It will releasing day after tomorrow. I want to congratulate him in beautiful words. Also I want to send him a request for copy of the book.

Please help me to write a letter with best wishes to him.

(please someone correct these sentences for me, Thanks)

Dear friend,
It's very heartening to know that our website rea