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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

My sentence structure ok.

To change the way we do business because others services/COCOMS and OIC's do not understand the unique and intrinsic nature of Marine postal in a disservice to the Marines.
  

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Hi, To change the way we do business because others services/COCOMS and OIC's do not understand the unique and intrinsic nature of Marine postal in a disservice to the Marines. I can make no sense of this. Do you mean 'is' instead of 'in'?

  • Hi, To change the way we do business because others services/COCOMS and OIC's do not understand the unique and intrinsic nature of Marine postal in a disservice to the Marines.
  • I can make no sense of this.
  • Do you mean 'is' instead of 'in'?
  • What do you mean by the slash?
  • Are you trying to list 3 separate things (ie others services, COCOMS and OIC's) ?
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Hi,

To change the way we do business because others services/COCOMS and OIC's do not understand the unique and intrinsic nature of Marine postal in a disservice to the Marines.

I can make no sense of this.

Do you mean 'is' instead of 'i

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