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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 12 years ago
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Hi!

Could you possibly check my sentence below please?

My first thought is you put all your heart in that song/while you are singing the song?
  

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I can't tell whether you're describing a performance or advising someone about a performance. 1. My first thought is that you (certainly) (did) put all your heart into that song as you were singing it.

  • I can't tell whether you're describing a performance or advising someone about a performance.
  • 1.
  • My first thought is that you (certainly) (did) put all your heart into that song as you were singing it.
  • 2.
  • My first thought is that you should put all your heart into the song when you sing it.
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I can't tell whether you're describing a performance or advising someone about a performance.

1. My first thought is that you (certainly) (did) put all your heart into that song as you were singing it.
2. My first thought is that you should put all your heart into the song when you sing it.

In either case you don't want the question mark at the end.

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You have been a big help, thank you Calif Jim.

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