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Hi, I am Lipika. Over the past three years, I am working with NEC Technologies India LTD. as Japanese communication coordinator and my responsibilities involve translation and interpretation. Before that, I worked as Japan Desk Manager in Avalon Courtyard Hotel and my responsibilities were to have a healthy communication with Japanese guest, providing basic amenities, getting their reservation and other needed arrangements done. I have done my schooling from Rainbow School, CBSE and done my graduation in Commerce from Delhi University. I studied Japanese language for three years from MOSAI institute of Japanese language. I also did 2 years of part-time course in Japanese language from New Delhi college and Daulat ram college respectively. I learned the values of teamwork and commitment, how to win, how to work hard, how to concentrate and focus on goals, and how to balance my time and priorities in my current employer. Going forward, I would love join your company and want to learn more and want to inline with the organization goals.

Doctor D · Accepted Answer

I assume you want a grammar check on this? And style? First, I would break up the longer sentences, use parallel format, and put this into short paragraphs. Here is how I would word it:

Hello, my name is Lipika [Full name]. Over the past three years, I have worked with NEC Technologies India LTD. as Japanese communication coordinator. My responsibilities involve translation and interpretation. Before that, I worked as Japan Desk Manager at the Avalon Courtyard Hotel where my responsibilities were to have a healthy communication with Japanese guests, provide basic amenities, take their reservations, and supply any other needed arrangements.

After attending the Rainbow School, CBSE, I graduated from Delhi University with a degree in Commerce. I studied Japanese language for three years at the MOSAI institute of Japanese language. I also took 2 years of coursework in Japanese from New Delhi College and Daulat Ram College [capitalize college names] respectively.

From these experiences, I learned the values of teamwork and commitment, how to win, how to work hard, how to concentrate and focus on goals, and how to balance my time and priorities. Going forward, I see your company and its organizational goals as a wonderful growth experience and an opportunity to make a real contribution.

Note: The last sentence of your statement was unclear and unfocused. I put in a somewhat vague closing statement, but at least grammatically correct and acceptable. You may wish to revise it.

I hope this helps.

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