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Angliholic Posted 18 years ago
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My pupil's speech

0Hi, The following is my pupil's speech. The title is "Controlling My Temper." Would you give her some advice after reading it?" Thanks in her behalf!02br
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00Bang!!! I slammed shut my piano hard with a bang, running angrily away from the living room and swearing to my uncle, "I'll never touch that piano again!"02br
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00Honorable judges, ladies and gentlemen, good afternoon!02br
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00Here is a regretable story of my losing temper. When I was ten, I was learning piano from my uncle, John. One day he urged me to practice hard as usual, but I was having problems breaking through my skills. So, I felt so frustrated that I lost my temper and had an argument with John. Then, I ran into my room crying and throwing pillows around. John was left alone in the living room. He must have been disappointed and heartbroken at that time. After a few days, before I had chance to apologize to him and say, "I'm sorry!" John had a car accident. Since then, he was in a coma and passed away before long.02br
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00Now it's too late and useless to feel regretful and say sorry. What a shame it was! It's only because I couldn't control my temper that I let my uncle down, and have to feel this deep sorrow for the rest of my life! If only he were alive, I'd do anything for him, let alone controling my temper!0-
  

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02br 02br 00Bang! 02br 02br 01b 00This02b 00 is01b 00 the regrettable02b 00 story of my losing 01b 00my02b 00 temper. When I was ten, I01b 00 studied piano with02b 00 my uncle, John.

  • 02br 02br 00Bang!
  • 02br 02br 01b 00This02b 00 is01b 00 the regrettable02b 00 story of my losing 01b 00my02b 00 temper.
  • When I was ten, I01b 00 studied piano with02b 00 my uncle, John.
  • 01b 00 I 02b 00felt so frustrated that I lost my temper and had an argument with01b 00 Uncle John02b 00.
  • 01b 00 Uncle John02b 00 was left alone in the living room.
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00Bang! I slammed shut my piano hard with a bang, running angrily away from the living room and swearing to my uncle, "I'll never touch that piano again!"02br
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00Honorable judges, ladies and gentlemen, good afternoon.02br
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01b00This02b00 is01b00 the regrettable02b00 story of
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0Thanks, Mister.02br
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00By the way, is it a good speech? Can the story touch you or convince you? Do you have advice on how to arrange the story? Thanks again.0-

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