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Hi,I  have presentation on sunday and I wrote what I have to say .Now I need your help to correct my mistakes and improve my presentation .Good morning everyone, I’m delighted to give me this opportunity to present my  research, which titled "The impact of native language on English-speaking skills. The purpose of the research is to find out the influence of the mother tongue and attempting to identify the aspects of effects accurately.This study is important because it may facilitate the improvement of instruction, increase the understanding of areas of difficulties in teaching and learning of the speaking skill, and provide foundations for remedy of language problems.The method of this research it is a case study methodology, which designs to search in depth, this will be very appropriate for the subject. The  participants are ................. students, 15 randomly-chosen , divided into strata or groups  based on their levels, the sample has chosen according to stratified random sample design.The interview will be instrument to collecting data according to their act of speech . As an oral test, data analysis will be mainly qualitative. Quantitatively, it will be analyzed by using SPSS program for descriptive statistic.Finally, I hope that my modest research will provide a little help in this big field in Linguistic. Thank you for listening , I'm interested to hear your views on what I have said.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

I have presentation on Sunday and I wrote what I have to say .
Now I need your help to correct my mistakes and improve my presentation .

Good morning everyone, I’m delighted to give me (You give to yourself? Or is someone else giving it to you?) this opportunity to present my research, which (missing verb) titled "The impact of native language on English-speaking skills. (missing punctuation) The purpose of the research is to find out the influence of the mother tongue and attempting (you need the base form here. - to find... to attempt) to identify the aspects of its effects accurately.
This study is important because it may facilitate the improvement of instruction, increase the understanding of areas of difficulties in teaching and learning of ~~the~~ speaking skills, and provide foundations for remedies of language problems.
The method of this research it (there is already a subject) is uses a case studies ~~methodology~~, (the method is a methodology does not work) which designs to search in depth, this will be (in the future? I was under the impression that this is past or current research)) very appropriate for the subject. The participants are ................. students, 15 randomly- (no hyphen) chosen , divided into strata or groups based on their levels, the sample has chosen (what did the sample choose? I think you mean the passive voice here - has been chosen.) according to stratified random sample design.
The interview will be (in the future?) instrument (either "an instrument to collect" or "instrumental in collecting") to collecting data according to their act (?) of speech . As an oral test(?), data analysis (do you mean "data analysis of the oral tests"?) will be mainly qualitative. Quantitatively, it will be analyzed by using SPSS program for descriptive statistics.
Finally, I hope that my modest research will provide a little help in this big field of in Linguistics. Thank you for listening , I'm interested to hear your views on what I have said.

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I understood some what you have said
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Good morning everyone, I’m delighted for give me this opportunity to present my research, which has titled "The impact of Arabic language on English-speaking skills. The purpose of the research was to find out the influence of the mother tongue and attempt to identify the aspects of its effects accurately.
This study is important because it may facilitate the improvement of instruction, increase the understanding of areas of difficulties in teaching and learning of the speaking skill, and provide foundations for remedies of language problems.
The method of this research is a case study, which designs to search in depth, this was very appropriate for the subject. The participants are.............. students, 15 randomly-chosen , divided into strata or groups based on their levels, the sample has been chosen according to stratified random sample design.
The interview was an instrument to collect data. As an oral test, data analysis was mainly qualitative. Quantitatively, it has been analyzed by using SPSS program for descriptive statistics.
Finally, I hope that my modest research will provide a little help in this big field of Linguistics. Thank you for listening , I'm interested to hear your views on what I have said.

Thank you so much

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Good morning everyone, I’m delighted that you (or e.g. the Linguistics Society of Saudi Arabia) have given me ~~for give me~~ this opportunity to present my research, which is titled (or "has the title") "The impact of Arabic language on English-speaking skills(where is the closing quotation mark? -") . The purpose of the research was to find out the influence of the mother tongue and attempt to identify the aspects of its effects accurately.
This study is important because it may facilitate the improvement of instruction, increase the understanding of areas of difficulties in teaching and learning of ~~the~~ speaking skills (there is more than one skill used in speaking), and provide foundations for remedies of language problems.
The method of this research, is a case study, (no comma) designed ... ~~designs~~ to search ( what did it search for?) in depth, ~~this~~ was very appropriate for the subject. The participants ~~are~~.were (use past tense if the study is complete)............. students, 15 randomly-chosen , divided into strata or groups based on their levels. This ~~the~~ sample was ~~has been~~ chosen according to stratified random sampling design.
The interview was an instrument (better: the means used to collect data) to collect data. As an oral test, (I don't understand what you mean "as an oral test." How is data analysis an oral test? ) data analysis was mainly qualitative. Quantitatively, it has been analyzed by using SPSS program for descriptive statistics.
Finally, I hope that my modest research will provide a little help in this big field of Linguistics. Thank you for listening. I'm interested to hear your views on what I have said.

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