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00I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not.02pre
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00If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them.02pre
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001.00Technological innovations certainly enable most countries to make significant 02pre
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00progress concerning economy, military, medical care, and standard of living. 02pre
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00But, human beings fail to make use of technologies innovation to create a peaceful 02pre
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002. With the end of the Cold War, America has to face another urgent problem: 02pre
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00the plan of the global counter-terrorism. Huntington proposed that the theory of 02pre
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00The Clash of Civilization in 1993 proved by the September 11 attacks. 02pre
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00This strongly highlighted the antagonisms between the United States and Islamic countries. 02pre
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003.  00The reason why the poverty of gap between developed countries and undeveloped ones 02pre
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00has been growing and widening is that both governments and businessmen of the first world 02pre
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00countries take advantage of their diplomatic power, great wealth, and modern technology to 02pre
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  • 10Technological innovations certainly enable most countries to make significant 12pre 11pre 10progress concerning economy, military, medical care, and standard of living.
  • 12i 10 Consider replacing it with 11i 10technological.
  • 12i 12font 12br 12pre 11pre 10 12pre 11pre 102.
  • With the end of the Cold War, America has to face another urgent problem: 12pre 11pre 10the plan of the global counter-terrorism.
  • Huntington proposed that the theory of 12pre 11pre 10The Clash of Civilization in 1993 proved by the September 11 attacks.
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10Hi 12pre
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10I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not.12pre
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10If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them.12pre
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10Thank you very much.8412pre
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