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MadeInUSSR Posted 20 years ago

my poem...shuga...

My skin is blind
My dream is blue
I am here
To love you...

(I wrote it last year..... mama mia :-S )
  

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I like the first two lines very much indeed. They are direct, visual and imaginative. Perhaps you could expand this into a longer piece.

  • I like the first two lines very much indeed.
  • They are direct, visual and imaginative.
  • Perhaps you could expand this into a longer piece.
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I like the first two lines very much indeed. They are direct, visual and imaginative. Perhaps you could expand this into a longer piece.

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