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Deepa Posted 22 years ago
My poems!
sweetpea in the rain water
Angry,wrinkled sweetpea
is hoping to see
the rain drops fall
from the above tree
But it's a long time
from now to see
any one dancing
in the first rain in the street!
There's no sign of
moisture all around
and been a long time
to smell the wet ground!
The sweetpea is now
in it's dry yellows
and is depressed to see
it's dying plant fellows!
Angry,wrinkled sweetpea
is hoping to see
the rain drops fall
from the above tree
But it's a long time
from now to see
any one dancing
in the first rain in the street!
There's no sign of
moisture all around
and been a long time
to smell the wet ground!
The sweetpea is now
in it's dry yellows
and is depressed to see
it's dying plant fellows!
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The wisdom of the orient.
- The wisdom of the orient.
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Wow! That's not a girl's poetry!
'Angry' in the first line.
'Dancing in the first rain' and 'smell the wet ground' in the middle.
'Dying' in the last line.
It feels like one rock back and forth on the swing. Good!
'Angry' in the first line.
'Dancing in the first rain' and 'smell the wet ground' in the middle.
'Dying' in the last line.
It feels like one rock back and forth on the swing. Good!
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Please don't mind my saying but there is a lot of distortion of thoughts from stanza to stanza.Well, maybe something is missing!
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