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Dj Bueno Posted 21 years ago
My Poem in Italian :)
Hi friends,
Since I'm just a beginner, I'm able to write simple poems for now but I am planning to improve it.I'll be glad to you if you find out my mistakes.Here it is;
E UNICO
Mi piace il sole,mi piace il mare
In Aprile andiamo a Hawaii dunque
Se ho molti soldi e una casa fastastica la
Posso dire niente ma "molto bene!"
Veglio fare qualcosa per qualcuno di speciale
Non é qualcosa di piccolo
E molti grande,é molto franco
W chiora di luna al mare
Perché ha una cuore singolare.
Mi piace tutto inerente lei
Andiamo a Hawaii alle sei
Adesso devo andare mio unico maestra
Per il momento,arrivederla...
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YOU ARE UNIQUE
I like sun,I like sea
We go to Hawaii in April then
If I have much money and a fantastic house there
I can say nothing but "Very well!"
I wanna do something for someone special
But it isn't something small
It's very big,it's very cordial
It's a moonlight in the sea
'Cause you have an irreplaceable heart.
I like everything about you
We go to Hawaii at six o'clock
Now I have to go my unique teacher
Goodbye for now...
Since I'm just a beginner, I'm able to write simple poems for now but I am planning to improve it.I'll be glad to you if you find out my mistakes.Here it is;
E UNICO
Mi piace il sole,mi piace il mare
In Aprile andiamo a Hawaii dunque
Se ho molti soldi e una casa fastastica la
Posso dire niente ma "molto bene!"
Veglio fare qualcosa per qualcuno di speciale
Non é qualcosa di piccolo
E molti grande,é molto franco
W chiora di luna al mare
Perché ha una cuore singolare.
Mi piace tutto inerente lei
Andiamo a Hawaii alle sei
Adesso devo andare mio unico maestra
Per il momento,arrivederla...
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YOU ARE UNIQUE
I like sun,I like sea
We go to Hawaii in April then
If I have much money and a fantastic house there
I can say nothing but "Very well!"
I wanna do something for someone special
But it isn't something small
It's very big,it's very cordial
It's a moonlight in the sea
'Cause you have an irreplaceable heart.
I like everything about you
We go to Hawaii at six o'clock
Now I have to go my unique teacher
Goodbye for now...
Top answer
This may be poetic in Italian, but in English it is just a poorly structured email love note.
- This may be poetic in Italian, but in English it is just a poorly structured email love note.
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This may be poetic in Italian, but in English it is just a poorly structured email love note.
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Hi Dj Bueno, congratulations for your effort! Actually your italian isn't too right, if you want I do some adjustment translating from english:
TU SEI UNICO
Mi piace il sole,mi piace il mare
dunque in Aprile andiamo alle Hawaii
Se avessi molti soldi e una casa fastastica laggiù
Potrei soltanto dire "molto
TU SEI UNICO
Mi piace il sole,mi piace il mare
dunque in Aprile andiamo alle Hawaii
Se avessi molti soldi e una casa fastastica laggiù
Potrei soltanto dire "molto
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FrancescaHi Dj Bueno, congratulations for your effort! Actually your italian isn't too right, if you want I do some adjustment translating from english:
TU SEI UNICO
Mi piace il sole,mi piace il mare
dunque in Aprile andiamo alle Hawaii
Se avessi molti soldi e una casa fastastica laggi
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FrancescaHi Dj Bueno, congratulations for your effort! Actually your italian isn't too right, if you want I do some adjustment translating from english:
TU SEI UNICO
Mi piace il sole,mi piace il mare
dunque in Aprile andiamo alle Hawaii
Se avessi molti soldi e una casa fastastica laggi
00
Not so many mistakes!!! Italian is difficult even for italian people! I see a mistake in my translation, this is the correction:
Mi piace tutto di te
Andiamo alle Hawaii alle sei
Adesso devo andare mio unico maestro
Per il momento, arrivederci
Ciao Ciao!
Mi piace tutto di te
Andiamo alle Hawaii alle sei
Adesso devo andare mio unico maestro
Per il momento, arrivederci
Ciao Ciao!
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thanks again 
by the way does "tu sei" mean "you are"? I mean do we useé only to describe the lifeless
by the way does "tu sei" mean "you are"? I mean do we useé only to describe the lifeless00
Yes, you are=tu sei.
"è" is the third person of verb to be, è=is. In italian "é" is used with things and persons. I think your translator translates "you are unique" like "è unico" because it uses the "respect, or courtesy form"; this is a tipical italian form that you generally have to use when you talk with someone older than you, or with your teachers, or with someone you didn't ever
"è" is the third person of verb to be, è=is. In italian "é" is used with things and persons. I think your translator translates "you are unique" like "è unico" because it uses the "respect, or courtesy form"; this is a tipical italian form that you generally have to use when you talk with someone older than you, or with your teachers, or with someone you didn't ever
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FrancescaYes, you are=tu sei.
"è" is the third person of verb to be, è=is. In italian "é" is used with things and persons. I think your translator translates "you are unique" like "è unico" because it uses the "respect, or courtesy form"; this is a tipical italian form that you generally have to use when you talk with someone older than you, or with your teacher
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Ok, now all the things are changed! I'm sorry, I thought it was dedicated to a boy. Anyway, your teacher is a male or female?
LEI è UNICO (if he's a male) / LEI è UNICA (if she's a female)
Mi piace il sole, mi piace il mare
dunque in Aprile andiamo alle Hawaii
Se avessi molti soldi
LEI è UNICO (if he's a male) / LEI è UNICA (if she's a female)
Mi piace il sole, mi piace il mare
dunque in Aprile andiamo alle Hawaii
Se avessi molti soldi
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Female.Yes I know that structure.When we are talkin about males we put "o" to the end of the word,when talkin about females "a" is put in the end.Eg. sigrora,signore
Thanks
Thanks
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