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Aismile Posted 22 years ago
My Poem--If
Hey, there
I am a new member here. I am so amazed to discover this website by chance. I love writing poems. I believe that writing shows us a way when there is no way. Here, I am going to post my pomems and share it with you guys. Comments are welcome, the more the better.
Warm regards
Aismile
If...
If hate is in pain
Why not try the opposite, love
If love is too much
Why not try the easier, like
If life seems too tough
Why not try to accept
If spirit lives longer than the worldly life
Why not try to step back from the latter And make effort to purify the former If we all have to die
And if it is only a matter of time Why not try to spend everyday as the last day of our life
Then what should have been done would be done
And what should have been said would be said
The secret to happiness would be revealed Throughout this pursuit of beauty and love
I am a new member here. I am so amazed to discover this website by chance. I love writing poems. I believe that writing shows us a way when there is no way. Here, I am going to post my pomems and share it with you guys. Comments are welcome, the more the better.
Warm regards
Aismile
If...
If hate is in pain
Why not try the opposite, love
If love is too much
Why not try the easier, like
If life seems too tough
Why not try to accept
If spirit lives longer than the worldly life
Why not try to step back from the latter And make effort to purify the former If we all have to die
And if it is only a matter of time Why not try to spend everyday as the last day of our life
Then what should have been done would be done
And what should have been said would be said
The secret to happiness would be revealed Throughout this pursuit of beauty and love
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Hi, I'm glad to know you Aismile, it's by chance today also I read your poem. It's great, meaningful. I like what you imagine, if...
- Hi, I'm glad to know you Aismile, it's by chance today also I read your poem.
- It's great, meaningful.
- I like what you imagine, if...
- it's possible and easily doing as you say it really can heal the world.
- All we have to do in our life is to win ourself as you say to try and to make effort to pass the difficult time in our life.
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Hi,
I'm glad to know you Aismile, it's by chance today also I read your poem. It's great, meaningful. I like what you imagine, if... it's possible and easily doing as you say it really can heal the world.
All we have to do in our life is to win ourself as you say to try and to make effort to pass the difficult time in our life.
I'm not good at writing, I'll try one
I'm glad to know you Aismile, it's by chance today also I read your poem. It's great, meaningful. I like what you imagine, if... it's possible and easily doing as you say it really can heal the world.
All we have to do in our life is to win ourself as you say to try and to make effort to pass the difficult time in our life.
I'm not good at writing, I'll try one
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Hello, Candle,
Yes. The beauty of the world lies in our imagination even though it seems tough. Thanks so much for your comments on my poem. Just smile to our failure, which is a very good but rare opportunity to discover another wonderful aspect within our personality.
I am looking forward to reading yours.
Cheers
Aismile
Yes. The beauty of the world lies in our imagination even though it seems tough. Thanks so much for your comments on my poem. Just smile to our failure, which is a very good but rare opportunity to discover another wonderful aspect within our personality.
I am looking forward to reading yours.
Cheers
Aismile
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Hi, Aismile
i came here after a long gap and really i m very glad to found new and nice sounds in this forum. I like your imagination and flow of words.
Thanks for sharing of ur words
Regards
Raji
i came here after a long gap and really i m very glad to found new and nice sounds in this forum. I like your imagination and flow of words.
Thanks for sharing of ur words
Regards
Raji
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HI AISMILE,
GLAD TO KNOW THAT SUCH YOUNG POETS ARE AROUND.
YOUR LINE-
"IF HATE IS IN PAIN
WHY NOT TRY THE OPPOSITE,LOVE"
THAT REALLY TOOK OFF MY HEART SOMEWHERE AND BOWLED OFF MY MIND
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SUCH WONDERFUL POEM.... IT HAS SO MUCH FOR US TO LEARN FROM
YOURS GREATFULLY,
AARTHI
GLAD TO KNOW THAT SUCH YOUNG POETS ARE AROUND.
YOUR LINE-
"IF HATE IS IN PAIN
WHY NOT TRY THE OPPOSITE,LOVE"
THAT REALLY TOOK OFF MY HEART SOMEWHERE AND BOWLED OFF MY MIND
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SUCH WONDERFUL POEM.... IT HAS SO MUCH FOR US TO LEARN FROM
YOURS GREATFULLY,
AARTHI
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AismileIf hate is in pain Why not try the opposite, love If love is too much Why not try the easier, like If life seems too tough Why not try to accept
Seeing the pattern, was that "life" in the fifth line intentional or just mistyping of "like"?
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