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Ajlaagner Posted 7 years ago

My poem

The tremor of rose

The shady side of woes

The rose was sick

The dark taunts stick

The numbness of bloom

In deadly song of gloom

The blooms of rose

Their burned hushed souls

The hushing song of red

my improsing dread

loftiness of rose

Harshly killed woes

Then blood came out

The red rose died

Blooms got life

but rose lost rife .

  

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Nice! What about this: Harshly killed woes Then blood came out » "tears of blood cried/sighed" ? The red rose died Regards

  • Nice!
  • What about this: Harshly killed woes Then blood came out » "tears of blood cried/sighed" ?
  • The red rose died Regards
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Nice!

What about this:

Harshly killed woes

Then blood came out » "tears of blood cried/sighed" ?

The red rose died

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I also really liked it, but it's sad

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