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Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
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My pet rabbit

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I have a pet. Its name is Small White. It is a rabbit. It has a cute face, white body and a short tail. It likes to eat carrots and vegetables. Small White was given by my father on my 12th birthday as a birthday present. I was very happy.

Every day, I will play with Small White. when it is dirty, I will wash it. If it feels hungry, I will take some food it. After having dinner, we will have a walk in the park nearby.

One day, when I brought it out to play at the roadside, suddenly, Small White ran across the road. Unluckily, it was hit by a trunk and died (on the spot). I was very sad because I had lost my pet. I grieved over its death and hoped it would have a peace in another world.
  

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