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Contiluo Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

My pet Nunu

Please help me correct the errors of the paragraph. Thanks a lot.

Do you have a pet dog? I do. I have a dog named Nunu. She has white fur, friendly eyes. She is very cute because she wears a smiling face with open mouth all the time. She runs almost like the wind blows. Unlike other dogs, she doesn't bark at all, and she takes good care of my pet rabbit as well. Her favorite exercise is playing fetch. Also, she is interested in everything that moves. She is my best friend and a part of my family.
  

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contiluo Please help me correct the errors of the paragraph below . Thanks a lot. I'd only replace a comma with an "and" here: white fur and friendly eyes.

— KhoshtipMan

  • contiluo Please help me correct the errors of the paragraph below .
  • Thanks a lot.
  • I'd only replace a comma with an "and" here: white fur and friendly eyes.
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contiluoPlease help me correct the errors of the paragraph below. Thanks a lot.
I'd only replace a comma with an "and" here: white fur and friendly eyes.
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KhoshtipManI'd only replace the comma
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contiluowith an open mouth
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teechrKhoshtipManI'd only replace the comma
Please re-read the post.
I meant "I'd only replace a comma with an "and" [in the whole text and] here:"
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contiluoI have a dog named Nunu.
Named or called.
contiluoShe has white fur, friendly eyes.
She has white fur and friendly eyes.
contiluowears a smiling face with open mouth all the time.
This is odd because it reads as if her face is something she puts on, like an ite
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