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Kyurkchiyski Posted 10 years ago
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My Personal Statement

Hi all Emotion: smile

I had to write a personal statement, so here it is:

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I have been working in the built environment since 2003, together with qualification as an architect in 2009.

I have worked on a wide variety of projects such as residential, commercial and industrial buildings, shopping centres, mixed-use complexes, and military building units.

I have specific skills like organizing and overseeing the workflow, coordinating of architectural and engineering design, and arranging meetings with investors, contractors and suppliers.

I have been using BIM software - Autodesk Revit in particular; since 2005, and I have considerable experience in developing and managing BIM standards, and selecting and training staff to work with Autodesk Revit.
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So, any comments I will appreciate.
I was wondering if there was any chance to omit the repeating phrase 'I have...'

Thanks in advance Emotion: smile
  

Top answer

) since 2003, together with qualification (You work together with other people. ) and I qualified as an architect in 2009. (I became a Certified Architect?

— AlpheccaStars

  • ) since 2003, together with qualification (You work together with other people.
  • ) and I qualified as an architect in 2009.
  • (I became a Certified Architect?
  • ) I have worked on a wide variety of projects such as residential, commercial and industrial buildings, shopping centres, mixed-use complexes, and military building units.
  • I have specific skills like organizing and overseeing the workflow, coordinating of architectural and engineering design, and arranging meetings with investors, contractors and suppliers.
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I have been working in the built environment (do you mean "construction"?)since 2003, together with qualification (You work together with other people. We don't work together with qualification.) and I qualified as an architect in 2009. (I became a Certified Architect? Did you pass the exams?)

I have wor
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Thank you very much AlpheccaStars.

About 'built environment' I mean this one: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Built_environment. I was not sure how to say it correctly.

About my qualification: in the first paragraph I pretty much want to say that I have been working in this environment sin
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KyurkchiyskiAbout 'built environment' I mean this one: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Built_environment
That is a social sciences term, not a building, construction or architecture term.

I have been working on construction projects since 2003. In 2009, I grad
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