Hi Sammy, From just glancing over your personal statement, I couldn’t help but ask you, are you from or , because “6 th Form” catches my eyes? The general impression I got from a quick glance was that your grammar is fine. The Statement, as a whole sounded a bit too wordy and redundant which could be improved with less words.
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