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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

My pargraph

Annie is a very brave girl she likes to defend herself and her brother she is so funny and carious. Every time you read about her she is happy. She is very carrying to her brother because they like to respect each other. She likes to help people because of what happened to her grandmother and her grandpa the both got killed off a big flooded she always wanted to be there because she wanted to help them survive. She loves to listen to people talk of listen to something lowed she can here very well and she is very good listener.
  

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Hi, There are several places where you need to put a period , and then a capital letter to start a new sentence. Can you look at your paragraph carefully, and see if you can find those places? Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, There are several places where you need to put a period , and then a capital letter to start a new sentence.
  • Can you look at your paragraph carefully, and see if you can find those places?
  • Clive
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Hi,

There are several places where you need to put a period , and then a capital letter to start a new sentence. Can you look at your paragraph carefully, and see if you can find those places?

Clive
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