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Sundarnaz Posted 13 years ago
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My paragraph needs a review, please

My mother is the world's best mother. She is very loving and caring person. She is very kind and affectionate towards us. She respects our grandparents and does her best to make them feel comfortable. She bears all kinds of sufferings to make her family happy and satisfied.
She says her prayers and recites the Holy Quran regularly. In her spare times she tells us moral stories. With the help of these stories she teaches us social and moral values.
  

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Guys it's been 24 hours I have posted this paragraph but nobody has review it yet. People around this forum seems to me got more busy.

  • Guys it's been 24 hours I have posted this paragraph but nobody has review it yet.
  • People around this forum seems to me got more busy.
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Guys it's been 24 hours I have posted this paragraph but nobody has review it yet. People around this forum seems to me got more busy.
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Please, Expert's review is needed.
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Nobody cares to check my paragraph?
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Hello, sundarnaz

This above is the paragraph you were telling Clive about.
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Yes, Yoong Liat, it was the paragraph but nobody cared to check it. I don't know why?, though, the paragraph was a short one.
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My mother is the best mother. She is a very loving and caring person. She is very kind and affectionate towards us. She respects our grandparents and does her best to make them feel comfortable. She bears all kinds of sufferings without complaining to anyone.

She prays and recites the Holy Quran regularly. In her spare time she tells us moral stories to teach us social and moral values.
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sundarnazYes, Yoong Liat, it was the paragraph but nobody cared to check it. I don't know why?, though, the paragraph was a short one.
Yes, Yoong Liat, it was the paragraph but nobody cared to check it. I don't know why though the paragraph was a short one.

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