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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 13 years ago
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Could you please help me to improve my writing below? How can I make it more interesting?
Hello Dave!
How are you keeping? Do you remember the photo of you which looks a bit unnatural for the body? Oh man, that looks extreme... (You can look at the pic, I've set it for my profile pic.)
Today, I woke with this sharp pain in my neck at dawn… I didn’t hurt it, I suppose, I broke my neck doing the same exercise four or five times successively (even more , I lost count)… Now I cannot move it at all… I couldn’t be more pissed myself because I hadn’t done any warm-up beforehand.
How could I be so stupid? We don’t bounce like children or babies, do we?
I've gotta get to a doctor for an X-ray soon. I hope the day gets better and better for me
Could you please help me to improve my writing below? How can I make it more interesting?
Hello Dave!
How are you keeping? Do you remember the photo of you which looks a bit unnatural for the body? Oh man, that looks extreme... (You can look at the pic, I've set it for my profile pic.)
Today, I woke with this sharp pain in my neck at dawn… I didn’t hurt it, I suppose, I broke my neck doing the same exercise four or five times successively (even more , I lost count)… Now I cannot move it at all… I couldn’t be more pissed myself because I hadn’t done any warm-up beforehand.
How could I be so stupid? We don’t bounce like children or babies, do we?
I've gotta get to a doctor for an X-ray soon. I hope the day gets better and better for me
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How are you doing? Do you remember the photo of you in which you are in a very contorted position? Oh man, that looks extreme.. (A person who does this for show is a contortionist.)
Today, I woke at dawn with this sharp pain in my neck … I didn’t hurt it, I suppose I broke my neck (If you had a broken neck, you would be in traction in the hospital fo
Today, I woke at dawn with this sharp pain in my neck … I didn’t hurt it, I suppose I broke my neck (If you had a broken neck, you would be in traction in the hospital fo
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